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Title: The Savior, Light
Author: Chestnut
Rating: PG
Pairing: Light X Luz, Gunz X Relenka, Luz X Dark, more...
Comments: Um, this is a REAL kinda story, not a fanfic. xD O yes, it's about vampires. Alot of my friends liked it.. So please comment, and enjoy!

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Chapter One
Dark

A storm was brewing; it’s pretty harsh for a summer day like this. The wind blew harder and harder, that even I felt a tad bit cold. The trees started shivering, they were vulnerable and very fragile, leaving their twigs to freeze and break. All the animals hid away to bathe themselves in warmth, from the powerful wind. 26 years it’s been, since I’ve seen reality. Unexpectedly, a young boy walks towards… Me? He started to speak. It’s really happening, someone could actually see me!
“…Do dragons exist?” He had a fragile voice, but a very soothing one. He stared up at the stormy sky, waiting for an answer.
“No they don’t, kid.” I replied, with a harsh tone attempting to scare him all the way back home. But voices these days aren’t creepy no more. Well if they were creepy still, he wouldn’t budge. Figures, he looked like he was 16 or maybe younger.
“ Why do you want to know about dragons anyways?” Only 8 year olds wonder about that, but when they become 10, they never see a live one, and lose hope.
“There are two reasons, one of them is because I am wondering who took my necklace, and the second, are they really dragons? Or are they vampires?” This boy had a big imagination, healthy for a boy his age, he was correct though.
“Okay, I do not know who took your necklace, all I know is that it’s not a vampire.”
“So you’re saying vampires, are real?” This boy was tall, strong, and handsome I admit, but he was as dumb as a fish. A fish’s brain size is the size of the font this story is in. Well, maybe I’m just exaggerating.
“Of course they’re real! Hasn’t your parents told you anything, fool?”
“I don’t have parents…” …What?
“Don’t fool around with me!”
“I’m not joking!” I’ll give him credit, this boy could shout!
“My parents were killed 8 seconds after I was born. Fortunately, I inherited everything they earned, and had.”
“…How did your parents die?” This was getting pretty tense… Not to mention exciting.
“I don’t know… I, however, remember the smell of Casablanca Lilies. I researched about them the day after I knew about it. I found out that they were nicknamed ‘Flowers Of The Dead’. They had two meanings I heard. Purity, and The Dead.” Okay so he isn’t that dumb. Casablanca Lilies… Could it be…?
“I see… But I’m still wondering, how can you see, or hear, or even know I’m there?”
“I can recognize unnatural beings just through presence, touch, and smell. And man, you wreak of potatoes.” Must be the hash browns I stole from McDonalds this morning.
“That still doesn’t answer how you can hear me.”
“To be honest, I’m not sure how I can! My friends’ say, however, I have a sixth sense. I am able to tell what is going to happen before it really happens! I can talk to animals, as well as blind, deaf, mute, etc, people. I am able to move things without having any physical contact. Also, I can see people who others cannot.”
“Boy, all those traits, is the same as mine.”
“Really?”
“Yeah, and I’m a vampire.”

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End of Chapter One. I'll add the other chapter later. I'm currently on Chapter 18. ^^